This news story is presented on BBC website and it successfully provided an important information about the missing plane-MH370,that is constantly concerned by many people.

This news is written in an inverted pyramid structure and that is good for readers to catch the point. The headline of this article is clear and contains “bullet point” that can attract local readers’ interest. Another trait I appreciate is that the writer uses chunks to break up the text with white space and organizes content by short sentences.

However, I think it still has a space to improve. One is that it could add some tags to highlight the focal point. In doing so, readers could quickly grasp the message.  Secondly, a suspicion about the source of one piece of the debris is little mentioned in this article, but it is fail to give more evidences and information. If the writer could offer a little more information in this aspect, the whole story would be more complete.

Thanks for reading.

My name is Chen Huijun

student number : 440524348

屏幕快照 2016-03-25 下午3.51.19

 

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